Commenting

Today i decided to comment on jaylee's blog post about length .

Commenting

Today i did commenting and i comented on jordans blogpost , i commented on his because he always gets his work done first . the blog post that he made was with only one sentence i think that he needs to get use to writing longer sentences maybe even paragraphs .

Commenting

Today I decided to comment on Sulia's Blog Post , her
blog post was about tongue Twisters .

Commenting

Today for commenting I commented on Afatia's blog post about her mounted art . It didn't really tell me much about what she did she basically just said that she made quatrefoils and showed a picture of her finished art so I think that she needs more writting to explain things .

Film Festival Commenting

Today we had our manaikalani film festival and now I am going to be commenting on a schools maniakalani video that i liked my favourite one was my schools one but im going to comment on another persons video . I decided to comment on Tamaki college's acid do you love me . It was one of my secound favourites so here is a photo of my finisheshed comment .

Commenting

This week for commenting I commented on Liletina's blogpost about swimming . Not just her blurb but her blogpost told me alot of things about her lesson in swimming .her blogpost also tells me when she went ( Thursday ) She told me why she went ( to get better ate swimming ) She told me who went ( almost the hole class ) She told me what happened ( what they did ) she told me where they went swimming ( lagoon pool ) and she told me much more to see more click here . 

Commenting

 This week for commenting I commented on alayah's Blog post . Her Blogpost was about bridges her DLO was really good and her Blurb told me alot of things .

Commenting

Today I commented on Angelicas blog post .
She was learning about the circulatory system .
Me and my group also learn about the Circulatory system . My question for Her was Did anyone help you for this ? 

Commenting .

Today I was doing commenting and I decided to comment on raera's blog post .

Raera was talking about making connections on her blog post . 

I really liked asking questions to raera just to see if she will answer them . 

I learned how to omment on other peoples wor including raera . 

I learned this by going on her blog and looking at what was recently updated and commenting on it   

LI: To comment on peoples work and also thing of a thoughtful comment , possitive comment and a helpful comment .

Commenting .

Today for commenting today i commented on alayah's kiwi sport .
This was not that challenging because it was kind of easy and kind of hard .
I learned how to comment on alayah 's blog post and write a proper one .

LI: To comment on someone blod post .

Commenting .