Show Don't Tell

Tell; the wind blew on my body. The sun was hot and there were seagulls flying around the ocean smelt like flowers.

Show; the wind pushed me around three billy bullies. The grass felt like lava floating above me.

Felt ;  it felt like heaven and it felt like the sand was like lava . i heard the ocean waving around like to rocks

Crashing into each other. . when the fish slap water at me the smell went up my nose.