Exciting Hook

The awaking of the Zodiac

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''A haha''! when the world was taken away

Jack went trick or treating and the  monster went  to go walking in the woods and

got lost so he hanged himself.

Then Jill found Jack and Jill said oh no Jack died  and every.

One was very sad .

Then for a little while Jill cried .

Everyone was so scared because Jack and Jill

Were best best friends and they would go everywhere together but now Jack had died Jill cried.

But then

Jill defeats monster and the soul transfers to Jack and brings him back to life.

LI: was to write a narrative  about Jack and Jill
what did you learn: i learned how to write a narrative
how did you learn : i learned it by planning it fist, finding the characters and setting's and also solve the problem's.